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By Doug De Vries
There are times when I try
And again it seems like not enough
Then I mess up and I wish I would die
I don\'t like it when life is tough
The ones I hurt are the ones who take it hardest
Can we understand eachother at all
Just leaving this life sometimes seems best
And I know that death\'s the longest fall
So I guess I\'ll stay in this life and live it
Because you can\'t just put life on hold
Now I\'ll keep trying and I won\'t quit
Live life to the fullest until I am old
There are times when I try
And again it seems like not enough
Then I mess up and I wish I would die
I don\'t like it when life is tough
The ones I hurt are the ones who take it hardest
Can we understand eachother at all
Just leaving this life sometimes seems best
And I know that death\'s the longest fall
So I guess I\'ll stay in this life and live it
Because you can\'t just put life on hold
Now I\'ll keep trying and I won\'t quit
Live life to the fullest until I am old
somethin i wrote just before college started. i dunno if it really has a point.
© 2003 - 2024 dunkler-adlig
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The poem holds some truth, I have to admit...very sad that it does...
Have you ever thought of re-writing this piece and making a sonnet? I do think it would work quite well...
Have you ever thought of re-writing this piece and making a sonnet? I do think it would work quite well...